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'Food' for thought...
Where to start? This story has a wonderful inventiveness in utilizing everyday happenings and winding social commentary through it. I will never be able to look at the motes of dust in a sunbeam without thinking of this...and without a shiver.
There are a few extremely minor glitches such as some words being repeated too close together (admittedly this is a pet peeve of mine). A quick edit to replace those words with other descriptors and this story is gold. It drew me in, made me think, and left me with the chills..
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