TheElectricWriter

“If there's a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it.” ― Toni Morrison

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Good so far...

I thought that so far, it's pretty great. It does have a few misspellings, and the last paragraph is pretty long, but other than that, I applaud it. The story is great, and I like how the action starts right off the bat. Keep working on it, don't give up!

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Really good

This story is amazing, and I really hope it succeeds. It has the perfect amount of emotion mixed with technology. Even if it doesn't succeed, I hope the author knows how good the book is.

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Pretty good

This is a neat story. I felt that it moved along too fast, however. In the first chapter, it passes literally three weeks in between two paragraphs. Other than that, it's a wonderful book, I hope that the author knows that.

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