TheGalacattopian

Sheffield

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So Sad

This story is so sad but beautiful at the same time. I was practically on the edge of my seat the whole time. I did not expect the ending that happened and I felt myself being both happy and sat at the outcome. I really loved this story.

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Beautiful

This moved me to tears. I love this song and the whole story line of the series of songs that go with it. And your writing was just perfect. You captured the moments beautifully. I was gripped in every moment, every memory. Well done. I loved it.

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Loved It

I love this song. (I am a big vocaloid fan myself) Your writing was really fun to read and I think you did very well in transcribing the song into a coherent story. Well done.
I loved your take on it.

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Interesting

When I first saw the story I didn't expect it to be a crossover but was pleasantly surprised. I like how the plot was unfolding and the characters are well written. Good job.
There are just a few grammatical errors now and then. But other than that I can't see much fault in the story. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work! :D

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