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Good story

The plot of the story is interesting and I like it, but the writing style should be improved a bit to make the reading more smoothly

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Impressive

I really like the story so far. It is interesting, impressive and unique.

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Great story

I enjoyed reading this story, it is interesting how you switch between the present and the past. Your writing style is good, there is a few grammatical errors but they can be fixed.

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