Run Flika Run
I thought this story interesting to the point I wanted to turn the page to see what happened next. I must say I was not disappointed. Sophia's love for her car I can well understand as I to love Ford Mustangs. The plot moves along at a good pace with the characters believable. However, Sophia jumping into bed with Pete on their first date does not put American women in a very good light. At least, that's the way I look at it. I would like to point out that I found editing mistakes on several pages that need to be rectified. In chapter 3 there are too many sentences that start with I Chapter 5 Glade to know?? should be Glad to know. Chapter 13 Pete so does not??? Chapter 17 then the suck value does decline. Apart from these I think Jeri has done a good job in writing this and I wish her success in her further writing, which I look forward to reading
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