Deviantly Crafted Word Salad
Tags: Review Swap, Read to Chapter 13, WIP
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Overall - I liked the story very descriptive and word choice. I, unfortunately, kept getting lost, sometimes where I got lost was the location in the story, other times with the choice of words. The story is very descriptive, dark, and sometimes depressing. I get a creepy vibe when I read the chapters (something good, the author instills feeling throughout the text with the colorful wording). The story is about the lifestyles of the rich and twisted with a strong supernatural touch.
Pros - Word Salad, rich details on characters. The author added some new fonts to the web version, enhances the experience.
Cons - Word Salad, sometimes I got lost in the description. Unfortunately, the Inkitt app did not display all the text, the author figured out how to add some new fonts to the web version,