Tom Sewe

Medical Doctor, Writer

Not following anyone yet

No followers yet

Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Interesting!

This is captivating, I hope I can read it to completion and provide more comprehensive feedback. My work "We, Wanderers" is quite close in terms of style and theme, but only staged in a different setting. Kindly let me know if you might be interested in a beta-exchange. Best wishes with this.
Regards,
Tom

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Fascinating!

A breath of fresh air. Brilliant style. Unique plot layout. The choice of themes is among the most engaging I have come across lately. They give life to man's most important yearnings and longings, including that of transhumanism- an overriding, innate humanly quest. Man wants to be a free soul capable of much more than is within his reach presently, and the author brings it out well in "Dead or Alive", an unrivaled word craft.
This is great, William, impressive plot twists and an overall engaging story that captures and captivates the reader all through. A little more polishing of the grammar and few beta-reads and this would be a winning story. You're poised for great heights William! Hope you never stop writing, man wants to read stories like these.
Best wishes!
Tom

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Well Done!

Some good writing and a hell of imagination! I loved the voice and style. Captivating, so far, and in many ways similar to my "We, Wanderers". I would appreciate your opinion on it when you get a chance to have a look. I hope to complete reading "Sins of the Father" through and get back with more comprehensive feedback on the overall plot and structure. Keep writing. Best wishes! 5 stars.
Tom

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Good Poetry!

Quite some authentic voice! Good poetry going. Keep it up!
Tom

Read the story now

No badges received yet

About Us:

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.