I LOVE THIS SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok so you don't see menay stories with passages that seem to never end, replaying the scene in your head eyes traveling across the paper as if something was tugging at them, bit by bit you finish the page not wanting to stop reading the perfectly placed words, because you know that you will have to wait to read the rest. the words glide across your brain like a rushing river. i know i will have to wait for the rest of the story even though I feel as if the page was turning automatically wanting to see what comes next. all in all this story is one of my favorites.
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Rashel, once again you have impressed me so much, I loved the plot of this story, your writing style...OMG it's so good! I love this story sosososo much, unlike your other story it actually has capitalized 'I' s and i am so happy to see that improvement! -Trinity
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Rashel, OMG, I have never read anything like this before, love the plot of this story, and the main character is/was so intriguing. this seriously sounds like a real life situation, this actually could happen, so kudos for that! the only thing I have to bug about is that the 'I's in a few sentences are lowercase and that's me just being picky, but otherwise I loved the story keep going and I think that you will do amazing in the writing world! keep doing good! -Trinity
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