The past, the present and the future walked into a bar. It was tense.
I liked the idea of your blurb. The idea that something has plagued her for so long and despite becoming an adult, she still couldn't understand a problem from her childhood? It's interesting. It's shown in the last part of the chapter and leaves an air of mystery about it.
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Do we know the name of the main character? I couldn't seem to find it.
The grammar could do with some work. 'I' always has a capital, regardless if it's in the middle of a sentence. You also capitalized words in their entirety to emphasise them, there's no need for that. You can use italics sparingly or exclamation marks also sparingly. Also, there are a few times where you capitalised the beginning of a word that wasn't needed.
There are a few issues with your tensing throughout, but with a quick edit that can be fixed. Same with dialogue tags.
"JAIME, you have called for a war", i shouted from behind.
So, you'd want that dialogue to look like this: "Jaime, you have called for a war," I shouted from behind.
Thanks for sharing this story. I look forward to reading more from you. :)