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Beautiful start. The plot is intriguing and different, which I appreciate more than you know. I'm tired of writers which disparage the art of writing with the same dull plots, unauthenthic characters, and lack of moral purpose. You sort of defied this is here. When I first read the intro I thought of prejudices and unfair platitudes that exist within people towards others for inherent or genetic characteristics. What I mean is, you're doing a great job, continue to incorporate important messages into original plots and you'll have a great story in your hands.
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