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Great Lead Character
I really enjoyed this story! In a short amount of time you were able to make me feel curious, frightened, and interested in Lieutenant. Harwood. He's a strong character with extra dimensions. He's "real".
The way you describe the dark silence spooked me! And the boy in the forest is creepy!
I'm looking forward to reading more stories written by you. I hope you'll have more with Lieutenant James Harwood!
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