Tusitala

I'll keep this short and sweet. I'm 13, I'm angsty and I hate long walks on the beach (the sand gets all up in my toes and it's just gross).

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B.R.A.I.N

This story has quite an interesting concept. I love the way you portray the future of humanity in such a believable way by incorporating actual problems which occur today. Despite the fact that the story is sci-fi it truly feels like a scary-accurate prediction of our future. I also think the way you manage to make it feel like you know the characters on a personal level within the first few chapters is remarkable. On top of this, your writing and grammar is practically flawless with very few easily understandable mistakes. I am really enjoying this book and can't wait for more.

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Academy for Young Love Addicts

What an interesting plotline. I have read a few distopian-like novels before, but none have been like this. The concept of having something so crucial to human survival be outlawed is quite an interesting idea. Not only this but other than a few places where commas should be and the fact that a word doesn't need an apostrophe unless it is possessive, the style of the story is very well-done. It feels like you are the character like you are thinking her thoughts right along with her. I quite enjoyed the book so far and can't wait to see what happens next.

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