Aria A

"Whether or not you write well, write bravely." - Bill Stout 6WordMemoir: Everyone I love keeps leaving me.

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This Is Great

I remember the first time I read this. It didn't make a lick of sense. It's a lot easier to comprehend now. I'm still unsure why the ending is the way it is, but if anything it leaves the story on a good, creepy note. From what I can tell your technical writing skills are pretty good. There's proper grammar and punctuation. I can't see any flaws. I still love your writing style. It's descriptive and I always know what to picture and exactly how to do so. So, wonderful. I loved it.

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An Epic Journey

This story took me to places I hadn't been in a long time. At first I was turned off by the journal style, but as I kept reading, I began to like it a bit more because it felt intimate. I feel in love with the characters. This story brought me to my knees, literally! At one point I fell out of my chair and crawled into the other room to rant and rave about it to my sister. The techinical writing skills are poor, but that's to be expected with this because it's a journal, meaning everything's informal--and I love that. It made falling in love with the story easier. I love the characters, but I hate what they had to go through. I felt for all of them. I feel like the plot was a bit cliche at times, or not as exciting as you could have made it, but I was always entertained and wanting more, despite that. And even in saying that, everything was still unique and it's own, at the same time. I read all of this in about two days. I stayed up late reading. I woke up early just to start reading it. I love this story, even if it's not a 5/5. Numbers aren't everything. My reading experiance with this story was more emtotional than any other books I've read lately. It made me mad, made me cry, made me laugh, and made me really happy. Thank you.

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Ouch, My Heart

Wow, this sort of breaks my heart. I think this is a good idea. Death is a natural, but painful thing. This is a good way to get your emotions out without all of the criticism and concern from our family. I like it. This can be a pretty neat story if you decide to make it into one. I'll support you. This is a good idea. I'd keep working on it.

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Awesome

I loved reading this. I loved the story in general. Your writing style is beautiful and descriptive. The plot of this story was also something that I loved. It was a great story. I feel bad for the guy for having to go through what he did because of those sea creatures. I'm sure he loved both of them very much, but while love is a powerful thing, it can blind people, as it did him. Also, where did that baby come from? Other sea creatures mating or sea creature and a human mating? It's not necessarily important to the plot but it's still a question that I think should be answered.

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This Is Good!

It's a nice and easy read. It's also easy to jump in on. It's not hard to follow, and there's a start and finish that makes it feel complete, even when being a small scene. Good job with that. I feel like there should be more to the story, despite that. Like this is just a little of something more.

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