There’s a lot to say about this story as I found it mellow, sweet, whimsical and entrancing. First off, your language of words are rhythmic and they entwine perfectly altogether.
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The way you add different languages plus their translations so we can better understand, makes the story feel more beautiful in its essence.
They way the story flows is easy, and surprising. The POVS with the cats are unique and give the story a unique and quirky perspective. There's something calming as I read your story, as it was very easy to picture it all in my head.
Your characters are well rounded, thought out and emotionally deep with such evolved personalities and traumas.
It feels as though every chapter is completely polished and you obviously put a lot of work into this story and it shows. Its flawless, its deep, its beautiful and its got colours that match the story. Even the cover feels perfect for this story. The grey shadowed figure in the cover and the colours all around, really resound deep when it comes to pain and sadness but there is deeper meaning to a world beyond.
All in all, it was a beautifully, written, quirky, whimsical, colourful story and I'm excited to read it to the end.