TwistedTayls

Deviant

This story is a beautiful, intrinsic work of art and visuals and languages, giving it a dark, sultry, rich sensual feel to it. The words turn into images in your head when you read it like you're watching a film or a show. The characters are wicked, intense, beautiful and their own work of art.
I enjoy how dark it is and it's not quite my thing, but I highly enjoyed it, like watching a game of cat and mouse play out between Mirabelle, Xavier and Xander. The twists are thrilling, there's a darkness that follows Mirabelle which is fascinating and I crave - as she would say - to know more.
I love your style of language, beautifully written, colorful, it's all show not telling, which is awesome and the way you do it can't be easy but you've crafted your own piece of art which is difficult to not be involved with.
I really have nothing bad to say about this at all, all I want is more and I look forward to reading this until the end.
Never stop writing :D

Great!

At the risk of sounding cliché, there is a rising growing tension I can feel in this story, like a slow burn. Like disaster could strike, or something big is approaching. A calm before the storm. I love fantasy stories, where the worlds YOU create are your very own and it's obvious, this is your world and I'm eager to learn more about this world, it's magic, its future and the characters stories. A couple spelling errors and such but I think this is a great start and I am excited to read more.

Whimsical

There’s a lot to say about this story as I found it mellow, sweet, whimsical and entrancing. First off, your language of words are rhythmic and they entwine perfectly altogether.
The way you add different languages plus their translations so we can better understand, makes the story feel more beautiful in its essence.
They way the story flows is easy, and surprising. The POVS with the cats are unique and give the story a unique and quirky perspective. There's something calming as I read your story, as it was very easy to picture it all in my head.
Your characters are well rounded, thought out and emotionally deep with such evolved personalities and traumas.
It feels as though every chapter is completely polished and you obviously put a lot of work into this story and it shows. Its flawless, its deep, its beautiful and its got colours that match the story. Even the cover feels perfect for this story. The grey shadowed figure in the cover and the colours all around, really resound deep when it comes to pain and sadness but there is deeper meaning to a world beyond.
All in all, it was a beautifully, written, quirky, whimsical, colourful story and I'm excited to read it to the end.

Awesome

It was a lovely read. It has all the good stuff, which makes it great; a book to read when you need some love, a little bit of steam, some laughs to have while curled up on the couch. I liked Scout as the MC, she's well written, tough, spunky and I just enjoyed her character. You could feel for her, follow through and be sad, angry and happy with her.
Can't wait to read more from you :D

simmering

Short but sweet for it. I definitely want more from start middle to finish. There's a slow simmering tension which we know will implode into something sexy which as a fan I'm excited for :D

Mind Blown

Mind blown. Just wow. I'm still saying what! It was not a typical time-travel romance novel. And I was expecting that time-travel cliché romance kind of story. But I was pleasantly surprised with the twists and how different it was. Your character was a person I can kind of understand in some aspects like going through life and the motions and letting things slip by and looking back and wishing you could just, try again.
I liked Olivia a lot as a character. Felt her solidness, her laid-back emotions and they way she seemed to watch life go by her. I felt like she had changed towards the end but not too much as she stayed they way she was but she felt more emotionally involved as the story went on.
The love interests with multiple guys was a great twist and everything with them, you had me begging, hopeful, saying please no and hell yes finally! You twist at the end with everything was another side-swipe that caught me off guard but damn I loved it. I liked all of your love interests until near the end, I was rooting for one or two but then you charged a different path and I like that hidden underlining thought and message.
And the smut was definitely hot and steamy, really well-written and could get anyone going woah.
Overall, an awesome story with twists and turns that will stun you and scenes that will make you go red in the face and say 'oh my'.

Thrilling

I have to start off by saying you had no flaws in your story, grammar wise not very much and story wise-none really. It was a great genuine story and after reading your author's note I understand how it's such a good story. It's a start of reality and borders into imagination and I love that. It's so creatively done and descriptive, but the story really matches the title 'Awkward Threesome'. It was awkward, the characters felt it, we readers can feel it and that's what I enjoy. Something that one can really, truly understand and feel, be a part of the characters journey and understand that things are never easy, especially when it comes to relationships and feelings.
On your story, I liked the flow of it. It was decent length story, sure I would've loved more but I liked the way it went and ended, a nice simple cut off where we can picture all that is happening and the happy ending. I felt emotional with Zoe, Hunter and Malik and excited and enjoyed the sex and emotional parts between the three.
To me, it wasn't just erotica it was real genuine romance and life to me. I'm really glad I read this and I'll probably read it again.

Awesome Read

I really enjoyed this story! I'm not one for the werewolf books, it takes a lot to get me interested but this was a definite great read! Twists and turns that had me going 'say what' and 'holy hell didn't see that coming!' I love books like that! Your characters, good and bad were well rounded fleshed out, it was easy to imagine everything going on in my head. The only downsides were rammar and spelling need a quick fix and it starts of slow but I guess that's the charm, to lull us into false sense of security and then bam you hit us.
P.S. I absolutely love your cover art! It's stunning. Makes the story shine just that much more.
I'm definitely reading the rest of your books now :D

Bucket List

I really enjoyed the story. Simply put. There are ranges of emotions everywhere that's probably understandable considering Jen's situation; pain, sadness, frustration and more heaped within. The characters are well rounded and put together and the loving sibling relationship between Jen and her brother is really sweet considering every difference they had.
Some sentences felt stilted and a few grammatical errors here and there and needs a runover.
Other than that, I enjoyed it and I look forward to reading to the end
Don't stop writing. :D

Beautiful

I found this story simple, sweet and beautiful. Had a love of life quality that made me feel a little happy and appreciative of life. I do wish there was more but I think that's the beauty of your story, short and sweet. All these lives intersecting, a new chapter for Mary, Jonathon and Mike, I really enjoyed this story.
I hope you write more because I think you are really good and it's a great start.

Wow

This is wow! The beginning was slow at first but then comes the intensity, the suspense, the thrill and wow, it had me hooked! I love the dynamics of your characters, your use of wording and you bring out the suspense and intensity is incredible. Don't stop what you're doing! Keep this up! I look forward to reading more of your books.

Beautiful

I am absolutely loving this story! Every time you update a new chapter I'm on here reading it! Eager to find out what is happening! It's intense, but quiet intensity, a calm before the storm, it's beautifully written and the characters are well done and well-rounded. The love between Persephone and Hades is so well written and beautiful and loving and I cannot wait to go to the end of this story! I adore Persephone as a character, she has flaws but she's growing and it's easy to see. Don't stop what you're doing!

Beautiful

I'm not one for purely romantic but I did love this. I love Greek mythology and it was a nice, emotional twist with Hades and Persephone's story. I really enjoyed the story, teared up a little here and there (it's the onions) and cheered for the lovebirds. I read it all in a day and I'll probably read it again because it was a good, enjoyable read and damn I want more to be honest. I look forward to reading more of your work :D

Awesome

Thank you for recommending this book to me because it was a really enjoyable and fun read. I wasn't expecting the twists and turns that happened and giggled a little here and there. The chapters are short and sweet which makes for a quick read because you can't stop reading.
I would just say go over your words a little more every now and then as there are some words that don't seem to fit in just right.

Goddamn!

I'm not happy because I have to wait for a second book! Haha. Wow, intense, gripping, chilling and now it's all up in the air now and just a waiting game for Jil and Mike.
You're very good at being chilling in your writing and your twists made me react as such! Never stop what you're doing! I'm so excited for the sequel.

Excellent

It was emotional, powerful and intense and the emotions were really gripping and I felt alongside the character. I did struggle with the last chapter is the only downside I have a little but everything else is excellent. Never stop writing.

Beautiful

Short but beautifully written. Extremely sad, I got emotional and I love your style of writing. Almost flowery itself, unique. It was both sharp and soft how you describe everything in both feelings and descriptions. I can't read to more of your work :)

Really Awesome

Hi, really loved this book! Thrilling, exciting, a good mix of ordinary and fantasy in this world. A few flaws, bit of grammar and stuff to look at but that's all really. Plan on reading the second book soon :D Keep it up! I look forward to reading you other works.

Excellent!

I'm not one for romance and drama but I do get caught up when it ends up really good and keeps me on the edge. This had me non-stop reading and I am excited for the conversation between Leah and Tanner and I just need more!
The characters, the drama, the feels were all there. And I look forward to reading more of your work.

Amazing!

The only downside I can say right is the slight spelling errors. Fantastic start and I'm begging you for more chapters!! I've got the feels and I need more.

Really Well Done

I really enjoyed this story. It was well written and I tried to take my time with it but finished it before I even realized it. Had to reread it a couple times, cause a few things were a little confusing to me. I had to look into Until Dawn to understand a little more, but this twist was nicely done. I find anything with Wendigo's extremely fascinating. There are a few grammar and misspellings that need to be cleared up a bit but that's really all.
Awesome work. I look forward to reading more. :D

My Heart

I really liked this story. I'm not so big on romance but I do read those that catch my attention and this one really did. Loved the characters, how loving and real they seemed. A warm-heartening story, that made me squeal excitedly, and tense with the drama going on. I look forward to reading the sequel. :D

Enjoyable Read

Hi there, really loving your story. The chemistry and the characters make the story a great read. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of it. I would say maybe go back and edit your work, there are a few grammar and spelling errors. Otherwise that's it. Keep up the good work :D

Has incredible potential

Hello, I'm sorry for the late review. I quite liked the story plot and where it was heading but I believe maybe you could've lengthened or added much more before it all changed for Sona. For example, show us a usual routine in his day and so we could get to know as more of a person. I'd recommend re-reading it but overall, this story has incredible potential and I look forward to more chapters.