This story is a beautiful, intrinsic work of art and visuals and languages, giving it a dark, sultry, rich sensual feel to it. The words turn into images in your head when you read it like you're watching a film or a show. The characters are wicked, intense, beautiful and their own work of art.
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I enjoy how dark it is and it's not quite my thing, but I highly enjoyed it, like watching a game of cat and mouse play out between Mirabelle, Xavier and Xander. The twists are thrilling, there's a darkness that follows Mirabelle which is fascinating and I crave - as she would say - to know more.
I love your style of language, beautifully written, colorful, it's all show not telling, which is awesome and the way you do it can't be easy but you've crafted your own piece of art which is difficult to not be involved with.
I really have nothing bad to say about this at all, all I want is more and I look forward to reading this until the end.
Never stop writing :D