TwistedTayls

Adelaide

"Is this a game to you!?" "No. This is life or death. I gotta have some fun."

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Brilliant

Wow! What a ride your story was and the best kind.
I loved everything about it. Your characters, how well rounded you made them, fleshing them out, their characterizations, quirks, their language. Your details are phenomenal and beautiful. Your writing style is beautiful and something fictional, it felt real, medieval and fantasy intertwined.
The story was from one place to another but well-paced and easy to follow.
Honestly have nothing bad to say about it just that it was incredible and I really enjoyed reading it and I'm grateful I got to read it.
Don't ever stop writing :D

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Deviant

This story is a beautiful, intrinsic work of art and visuals and languages, giving it a dark, sultry, rich sensual feel to it. The words turn into images in your head when you read it like you're watching a film or a show. The characters are wicked, intense, beautiful and their own work of art.
I enjoy how dark it is and it's not quite my thing, but I highly enjoyed it, like watching a game of cat and mouse play out between Mirabelle, Xavier and Xander. The twists are thrilling, there's a darkness that follows Mirabelle which is fascinating and I crave - as she would say - to know more.
I love your style of language, beautifully written, colorful, it's all show not telling, which is awesome and the way you do it can't be easy but you've crafted your own piece of art which is difficult to not be involved with.
I really have nothing bad to say about this at all, all I want is more and I look forward to reading this until the end.
Never stop writing :D

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Great!

At the risk of sounding cliché, there is a rising growing tension I can feel in this story, like a slow burn. Like disaster could strike, or something big is approaching. A calm before the storm. I love fantasy stories, where the worlds YOU create are your very own and it's obvious, this is your world and I'm eager to learn more about this world, it's magic, its future and the characters stories. A couple spelling errors and such but I think this is a great start and I am excited to read more.

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Beautiful

Short but beautifully written. Extremely sad, I got emotional and I love your style of writing. Almost flowery itself, unique. It was both sharp and soft how you describe everything in both feelings and descriptions. I can't read to more of your work :)

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Awesome Read

I really enjoyed this story! I'm not one for the werewolf books, it takes a lot to get me interested but this was a definite great read! Twists and turns that had me going 'say what' and 'holy hell didn't see that coming!' I love books like that! Your characters, good and bad were well rounded fleshed out, it was easy to imagine everything going on in my head. The only downsides were rammar and spelling need a quick fix and it starts of slow but I guess that's the charm, to lull us into false sense of security and then bam you hit us.
P.S. I absolutely love your cover art! It's stunning. Makes the story shine just that much more.
I'm definitely reading the rest of your books now :D

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Bucket List

I really enjoyed the story. Simply put. There are ranges of emotions everywhere that's probably understandable considering Jen's situation; pain, sadness, frustration and more heaped within. The characters are well rounded and put together and the loving sibling relationship between Jen and her brother is really sweet considering every difference they had.
Some sentences felt stilted and a few grammatical errors here and there and needs a runover.
Other than that, I enjoyed it and I look forward to reading to the end
Don't stop writing. :D

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Dark and fascinating

This was a twisted mad world in just a few short chapters and it was easy to get hooked on. The characters are a mixed cocktail that takes a bit to sort out and see a bit of the behind the scenes.
The idea and plot of this story is incredible and you added more into your story as in descriptions and imagery and I was really happy with that. I would suggest going through it to fix up a few lines here and there but as a first story, I loved it and I really look forward to more of your work :D

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Wild!

Your story was wild from the beginning. It was short wild ride that I actually really enjoyed. I've not read much horror romance stories and I figure it's quite difficult to combine two separate genres. But it was really in this story. The characters were wild, had characteristics that were easy to feel and identify with. The biggest issue I had with this story was I wanted more. I felt like there was so much more that could be added, like flashbacks and scenes with characters. It just felt like I missed a lot like a page had been ripped out from a book. So while I enjoyed the fast-pace feel and wildness of it, I feel like there were a couple missed sections. And I say this because I would love more of this. Other than that and a few spelling errors, awesomely done and I'm excited to read future stories you write :D

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Beautiful

I found this story simple, sweet and beautiful. Had a love of life quality that made me feel a little happy and appreciative of life. I do wish there was more but I think that's the beauty of your story, short and sweet. All these lives intersecting, a new chapter for Mary, Jonathon and Mike, I really enjoyed this story.
I hope you write more because I think you are really good and it's a great start.

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Wow

Congrats on your first novel. It was an incredible read and was fast paced, suspenseful, intense with little twists here and there and something always added on in the next chapter to keep us on edge. I loved it. It was a great read and I'm going to read more of your stories. Keep it up!

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Wow

This is wow! The beginning was slow at first but then comes the intensity, the suspense, the thrill and wow, it had me hooked! I love the dynamics of your characters, your use of wording and you bring out the suspense and intensity is incredible. Don't stop what you're doing! Keep this up! I look forward to reading more of your books.

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Beautiful

I am absolutely loving this story! Every time you update a new chapter I'm on here reading it! Eager to find out what is happening! It's intense, but quiet intensity, a calm before the storm, it's beautifully written and the characters are well done and well-rounded. The love between Persephone and Hades is so well written and beautiful and loving and I cannot wait to go to the end of this story! I adore Persephone as a character, she has flaws but she's growing and it's easy to see. Don't stop what you're doing!

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Beautiful

I'm not one for purely romantic but I did love this. I love Greek mythology and it was a nice, emotional twist with Hades and Persephone's story. I really enjoyed the story, teared up a little here and there (it's the onions) and cheered for the lovebirds. I read it all in a day and I'll probably read it again because it was a good, enjoyable read and damn I want more to be honest. I look forward to reading more of your work :D

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Wow

It started off very dark and I don't mind dark. Very intense, very cold, harsh and then the slight twist at the end of who she is and now I'm very curious to see what happens. I'm eager to follow this story to the end.

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Awesome

Thank you for recommending this book to me because it was a really enjoyable and fun read. I wasn't expecting the twists and turns that happened and giggled a little here and there. The chapters are short and sweet which makes for a quick read because you can't stop reading.
I would just say go over your words a little more every now and then as there are some words that don't seem to fit in just right.

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Goddamn!

I'm not happy because I have to wait for a second book! Haha. Wow, intense, gripping, chilling and now it's all up in the air now and just a waiting game for Jil and Mike.
You're very good at being chilling in your writing and your twists made me react as such! Never stop what you're doing! I'm so excited for the sequel.

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Excellent

It was emotional, powerful and intense and the emotions were really gripping and I felt alongside the character. I did struggle with the last chapter is the only downside I have a little but everything else is excellent. Never stop writing.

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Really Awesome

Hi, really loved this book! Thrilling, exciting, a good mix of ordinary and fantasy in this world. A few flaws, bit of grammar and stuff to look at but that's all really. Plan on reading the second book soon :D Keep it up! I look forward to reading you other works.

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Intense

It's very intense and quite thrilling, I got the chills. Really good story so far and the characters are well-rounded interesting. Can't wait for more :)

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Excellent!

I'm not one for romance and drama but I do get caught up when it ends up really good and keeps me on the edge. This had me non-stop reading and I am excited for the conversation between Leah and Tanner and I just need more!
The characters, the drama, the feels were all there. And I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Amazing!

The only downside I can say right is the slight spelling errors. Fantastic start and I'm begging you for more chapters!! I've got the feels and I need more.

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Really Well Done

I really enjoyed this story. It was well written and I tried to take my time with it but finished it before I even realized it. Had to reread it a couple times, cause a few things were a little confusing to me. I had to look into Until Dawn to understand a little more, but this twist was nicely done. I find anything with Wendigo's extremely fascinating. There are a few grammar and misspellings that need to be cleared up a bit but that's really all.
Awesome work. I look forward to reading more. :D

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My Heart

I really liked this story. I'm not so big on romance but I do read those that catch my attention and this one really did. Loved the characters, how loving and real they seemed. A warm-heartening story, that made me squeal excitedly, and tense with the drama going on. I look forward to reading the sequel. :D

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Enjoyable Read

Hi there, really loving your story. The chemistry and the characters make the story a great read. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of it. I would say maybe go back and edit your work, there are a few grammar and spelling errors. Otherwise that's it. Keep up the good work :D

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Has incredible potential

Hello, I'm sorry for the late review. I quite liked the story plot and where it was heading but I believe maybe you could've lengthened or added much more before it all changed for Sona. For example, show us a usual routine in his day and so we could get to know as more of a person. I'd recommend re-reading it but overall, this story has incredible potential and I look forward to more chapters.

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