Brooks Guill

I just posted my first ever poetry collection!

Give this story a chance: "Breaking Asphalt" is finally available in English! 🌍✨To all my followers here who couldn't read my book before because of the language barrier — the wait is officially over. The English version is now live right here on my profile!I am uploading the chapters now, so please give "Breaking Asphalt" a chance, add it to your reading list, and follow along with the updates! I promise it will be worth it.Let me know your thoughts in the comments as you read. I can’t wait to finally share this journey with you! 🖤

My short horror story “leftovers” is coming soon. It’s the second story in my brand new anthology series “HUSH” a series full of horror

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The twisted bluegrass is a good reading , i write a review and i will continue to read it s good , i will apreciate is you will look at my first story it is not a horror , but it is short , Keep going

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I'm so glad you decided to follow me! I have come back to Inkitt after a short Hiatus. I have resumed writing my best story yet 'Top Marks' and I can’t wait to publish more chapters.

This is the synopsis: "Owen thought that moving to New Zealand's North Island and starting school at Mangrove College would be easy. That is until secrets that weren't supposed to be uncovered, come to light. Drama, adventure and romance will drive the characters to their limits, and make them do things they'd never thought possible."

Are you interested yet? If yes you can check it out here: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1403156

That would be greatly appreciated. Do you know what would make me even MORE happier. If you left a comment or even a review ✨ that would make me so happy!

I will try to reply to every comment and if you have any questions just ask them.

I also have many other shorter stories which are quite quick to read so you have no excuses to hop over onto my profile and explore! 🗺️🧭

To visit my profile, press on my name 'Tobias Kailing', see you there!

Some thoughts and suggestions on 'It's for the better'- there is plenty that resonates. The story told through the letter gives the mother's voice agency. Consider how the impact could be enhanced through segments revealed in conversations, such as at her wake or locations of your choice. Resources to sharpen delivery. 1. https://phrasefix.com/tools/most-used-word-checker  it will surprise you how often filler/overused words creep into a story- Was with that but etc. Was  indicates telling not showing. 2. https://kathysteinemann.com/Musings  find the archive pdf- it's full of overused words and cliches and the solutions for writers. 3. https://onestopforwriters.com/emotion_amplifiers -  here is the body language that shows rather than the author telling the emotion.  All the best with your writing. Take the step to rewrite and turn a good idea into a crafted, top-notch story.

Another short horror story is coming out tomorrow!! Story 2 of "The Twisted Bluegrass Folklore" series. Keep an out for it. 👀👻

"A wild man" short horror story is published!! Give it a read if you like sasquatch's 👀👀