Victoria_Rose

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Great start!

I enjoyed the premise for this book, the idea of Cupid coming to earth has a lot of potential for romance and comedy. I like that the MC is flawed and imperfect, but watch out for making her too abrasive. She needs at least one "redeeming" factor (i.e. she loves animals, she's good at music, she helps someone when they fall down) just one small thing that lets us know that she is going to grow and change over the course of the book. Overall, great start and I look forward to reading the rest!

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