Victoria Rose

Ontario

Teacher of English by day. Writer of romance by night. Lover of books always and forever.

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Great start!

I enjoyed the premise for this book, the idea of Cupid coming to earth has a lot of potential for romance and comedy. I like that the MC is flawed and imperfect, but watch out for making her too abrasive. She needs at least one "redeeming" factor (i.e. she loves animals, she's good at music, she helps someone when they fall down) just one small thing that lets us know that she is going to grow and change over the course of the book. Overall, great start and I look forward to reading the rest!

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If you're looking for a steamy read, look no further!

Whew! I feel like I'm still sweating after reading Mind Night Blue! If you are in the mood for pure, high-adrenaline erotica, then this it the book for you. The plot is a bit thin on the ground, but that doesn't really matter when you're confronted with the mysterious origins of the Bampires (gotta admit--still can't type Bampire with a straight face). This is a unique and definitely SMOKING HOT 🔥🔥 take on the vampire "bampire?" mythos that I'd definitely never heard before! Would definitely recommend for anyone in search of a hot story.
-Victoria Rose

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Good Story with a lot of promise!

I really enjoyed this story. The author feels a lot for all of her characters, and it is obvious in the prose, which moves quite smoothly. There are a few things I would suggest:
1) Title. I'm an English teacher, and I'll admit I love a big, chewy word like "recrudescence". However, since it's probably not a word many of your readers will be familiar with, they might not know what your story is about, and therefore might not click on it. I would consider changing your title to something more readily accessible. (i.e. "Recovery", or "Renewal").
2) Characterizations. I really love your characters of Omar and Sofia, but I felt that sometimes they got lost in the shuffle, and their romantic arc wasn't completely fulfilled. A lot of your episodes go into histories and details of the universe--which I love! But consider adding a little more direct conflict to your chapters, so they don't feel like sections from a history book.
Overall, I loved this story! The characters are believable, and it's a fresh and new take on the shifter genre. Would definitely recommend!
-Victoria Rose

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