VyaghriniLightning

The pen is mightier than the sword........I hope to write for change.......

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Great Suspense🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I like the mysteriousness of the place. The suspenseful plot is really cool. There are a few typos and grammar could use some proofreading...appart from that this a really good beginning! Please finish it. I recommend this book to everyone whose likes to be kept on heir toes. Very engaging:)

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Please make this a series!!!

I love how it sounds just like a kid's voice. It could use some more work on the punctuation and spelling-they're all mostly just typos, though. I really like how the character copes up with the change. I also love her wild imagination and her belief in the zodiac. The teasing is very relatable with especially with my own childhood and both the ways of "getting even" were absolutely amazing-especially the first one. It's an amazing story and I think it even deserves to be a children's series.

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Amazing plot!

The language is simple, yet effective and hooks the reader. The setting is simple and not over-exagerated like it usually is in most mystery stories. Sophie is a believable and lovable character burning with wit and fire. I am especially impressed by the plot which turned the mystery in different directions. Great work...Is this book part of a series? The book seems to refer to a back-story which I would love to read, if available....

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Beautiful story

I really love the warm family atmosphere and how they go through their ups and downs together. I also love how they are so dependent on God and God's will. It's an amazing story.

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Amazing work!

I love all the characters. They're all amazing. This book is amazing!! Please finish it. As usual, you've hooked me and I'm dying to know what will happen next!

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Amazing plot!!

Great job! The suspense, the spookiness-Awesome!

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A story about adapting to change!

The way the characters evolve throughout the story is great. My favourite parts are in the farm. Oubaas and Trina are my favourite characters. The writing style is very relflective of Monica's shy simple and shy persona. The only draw-back was the ocassional places where there was no space between words where there should have been. Apart from that, it was an amazing story over-all. I love the symbollism of the chameleon and the subtle hints of it throughout the story like-wait! I don't want to give the readers spoilers so, people, just go and read it yourselves!!

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