First of all: the Stephenie Meyer Act of 2005. YEESSSS! Someone finally gets how messed up those books were!
The rest of the story was also excellent. It was very fun to read, and your tone was very good throughout the story. The plot was a little weak, but it made for a good read in the end.
I think that this story is very good. You have a beautiful writing style that really makes me feel for your main character. A few little things that I would comment on, though, are the pacing. It seemed a little slow in the beginning, and then the changes in the main character sped up very quickly. She also seemed like she was not very worried about what was happening to her. I really enjoyed it overall, though. Thank you for writing this!Read the story now
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