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My Review of "My Own Kind of Freedom"

I stayed up three hours past my bedtime to finish reading this story.

I was in the 'verse. I could hear the characters thinking, talking, I could see what they saw. I could see their faces, their expressions. I was there, watching it all, almost apart of it myself.

This story felt like a Firefly episode: the mannerisms, slights, cut-offs, flashbacks. It is well written and enjoyable.

The I almost ranked the writing skills 4-stars. I found a double "it", and was surprised. I read the sentence a few times hoping it was deliberate speech, but honestly, I'm not sure.

Bruce, thank you for such entertainment!

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