Nicely done
Strengths:
- characters: intriguing, very well done POV
- dialogue: great slang and very realistic, funny at times
- pacing: lagged a bit in the middle like previously mentioned but comes back strong with the action
- ending: funny and revealing
Overall: very interesting story with unique main character. As mentioned, much like Dexter. Ending was on point. Deterioration of main character's brain was subtle but telling.
