WinsomeFun

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Nicely done

Strengths:
- characters: intriguing, very well done POV
- dialogue: great slang and very realistic, funny at times
- pacing: lagged a bit in the middle like previously mentioned but comes back strong with the action
- ending: funny and revealing


Overall: very interesting story with unique main character. As mentioned, much like Dexter. Ending was on point. Deterioration of main character's brain was subtle but telling.

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