WinterSpark

Malaysia

Minecraft Player, Youtuber Fangirl, Touhou Addict, Vocaloid Lover, Hetalia Shipper, Writer, Fanfictioner, Quotever and Woman of Many Hobby With Too Much Time

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Cool Story!

I don't normally read these kinds of stories, but I like to keep and open mind and read them anyway. It certainly has a good plot and I like your writing style.

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Creepy...

...Is this a one shot? I have a feeling it is. If no, then, a wonderful start for a psychological horror. I love these kinds of stories, they can make you so paranoid sometimes. I would love to read more, but hey! If you're not going to post another chapter then it's fine with me. :)

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Nice start

A fairly good start for a story. Makes me curious for what will happen next. I was... disappointed, simply because there were not extra chapters for me to read. The grammar and writing style is good too, actually. I'll be looking forward for more!

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Interesting...

This is definitely something to look forward to. To be honest, I haven't seen a lot of HetaOni crossovers out there. They're a rare breed, I must admit. Even mine is a rare breed... I think. I'm very curious to find out what happens next!

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Cool story overall

I admit, it's been a while sine I've read my last tragedy-ish story. The plot is solid, probably can bring me to tears if you try harder. I love the your writing style, it seems to be more different than the rest. Need to work a little bit on grammar as there were minor mistakes here and there, but I think it's alright!

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