Melissa Page

Greetings. I'm Melissa. My life revolves around creating things. I love writing, especially reading I don't go a day without a good ebook. I've just started my first story the Night of Liberation.

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A great and gripping read

From the start this story had me hooked. The writing is intricately woven, a unique take on two varying points of view. Both sides of the character is kept interesting throughout the chapters. 'Her' is my favourite, she adds another side to this story which keeps the reader wanting to know more about what's happened to them. 'Me' the main narrative has good conflicts with the other side. All the characters are introduced well, and brought to life.

Some chapters are shorter but that makes it an easier to read and keeps the story flowing nicely. Both punctuation and grammar are good. Only a few minor errors but that can easily be fixed with editing.

I would reccomend this story. Even the voices in my head agree. 🙃

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Good Book

It's been a while since I've found a good vampire book to read. Overall the story has been good, and it's getting juicy with the introduction of new characters and the scenes between Dess and Ly. The start is slow, but it introduces the world to the reader very well. The writing is gripping, and an easy read. Only thing is the speech marks, that can easily be done with a little editing.

It would be a book I recommend reading. 🙃

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A Great Story!

This book is absolutely captivating. I love the writing style, The story flows smoothly. The world is introduced well, and it enchanted me from the moment I started reading this book. Keep up the great work.

I would highly recommend reading this book. :D

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