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I have read this story in two sittings because It is hard to put down! It really draws the reader in. The story moves at a good, quick pace and there is always something new happening to keep you interested. The plot twists are intriguing.and the characters are developed and entwined within the story in a very believable and thorough way. The author is to be congratulated on the high level of writing skills throughout this story and the way the writing style compliments the situation in the plot: whether it is a tender or reflective section or pure action. It adjusts and morphs to suit beautifully.. Never does the writing style get in the way of the plot.This is a well constructed and very enjoyable story worthy of being in print in any medium. Please write some more!!!

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