Review: Dave-y
This story has a good narrative voice. The Author writes in detailed and informative manner. An interesting and uncommon idea for a story. I found the pacing could be a bit slow in areas, but not to the point where the reader loses track of what is going on in the scene.. I really enjoyed the clear way the story is told, very straight forward and clear, At no time did I find myself wondering what the author meant. The tone and ability of the writer to created a feeling of realism of this story are solid points that can fully immerse the reader in believability.
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