Good story, but...
WHERE ON EARTH IS THE REST OF IT?! I just finished it, and the ending left me wanting a lot more. Apparently this story is complete, but I feel that there should be much more.
Your story is very good. I enjoyed the plot, and I felt that the characters were very real.
If the spelling and grammar of this story were fixed up, and the story was ABSOLUTELY FINISHED, then I reckon this could become publishing material.
I sincerely hope that you continue your writing endeavours. Take care, Anehalia, and keep writing (especially this one!)!
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