Writingelk

Montreal

E Lloyd Kelly is the Writingelk, Author & poet, read new books for free & share the love. ELK is here, https://elkspages.blogspot.com, https://www.amazon.com/-/e/B01G7NYWL6

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Great potential, but...

There are so many things to like about this story but, I think it needs a lot of work yet. It's seems to be an original concept, with lots of action and suspense. And on a personal note, I was quick in noticing that one of the main character's name (Liam) is lifted straight out of my "Tattooed trails" story. Would be nice if you can take a minute to look at it. However, punctuation, spell-check is required, I sometimes get the feeling as if I'm reading a story written by someone whose English is a second language. My suggestion is: Run the script through a text-to-speech software while following along on the script. this way you gets to hear and pick up irregular speech pattern and glitches. one final thing, which may not be an issue at all is: I noticed that the chapter seemed a bit long, inkitt does have something to say about this in their guideline, check it out. Over-all, I love what I've seen of the story so far, looking forward for the finish product.

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You mdae me a believer

I am captivated by this, right off the cuffs. The who, where, when and what was taken care of and I just wanted to delve in, I did, and totally loved it. A couple of draw-backs would be: a, A few more pronouns might have worked better instead of Dav… you know, him. And b, the chapter seemed a bit long, inkitt does have something in the guidelines about that, we wouldn't want to run into issues there. Over-all, this is destined to go places. Thank you.

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I'm loving it

This is the book I wish I had written myself. And I'm sure my church family would too, before I went out and did what I did: writing a book about love and romance. So, I'm up two chapters, and I've added the book to a list. will be back for more.

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