J.L Weaver

Tampa, FL

My name is Jariah, a wanna be author that doesn't just write to escape. This is just the beginning of me. My wattpad is XxRiah916Xx if you wish to see more of my work <3

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Needs work ;/

From wattpad the story caught my attention just from the small cut that came from inside the story. The first chapter was amazing, the female character was closed off like I expected someone who has been bought and sold off constantly would be and from there it started going down hill. The male character didn't stick to his belief that he wasn't interested in his pet but slowly began to do the opposite. The grammar is HORRIBLE, I tried to ignore it all like everyone who has read the book but I just couldn't; there were so many misspelled words, words that didn't belong, and incorrect use of words. There were plot holes as well. All in all, this book turned out to be just like every slavexvampire master book is but just given more attention.

I'm saying that I want the book perfect, just that the author needs to use an editing app or proofread the chapter before its uploaded and go back to see what she missed.

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SLAY ME

I read this story a while back on watttpad while it was still being update and I describe how much I've come attached to it that I felt like I could barely breathe, this book is so addicting this wouldn't be the first time I would drop everything just to read a recent of this book. I would say that this book is better than "Twilight" and won't be surprised to see this book become a best-seller

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So-so

The book was okay. And I'm putting it lightly, there were many parts where I got confused and frustrated at the main character, wish she would had done things differently and the twins were getting on my nerves with their dominance. Some parts could have been explained better and words switched around; overall this was an okay book.

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My Name!!

The reason I'm giving this book five stars is that part of my real name in it and it made my heart jump, my full name is Jariah <3 I haven't read the story but I will soon, the reviews above mine are really promising.

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One book you cannot put down

This book still leaves me speechless, I've have never been obsessed with a book like I am with this one. I've found this book while scrolling on Radish for Erotic (no shame) books and I've seen the title that interested me and that's how my obsession began, I couldn't get enough of one chapter and had to go to the next. This books has put my heart through some shit when my face wouldn't express what, I love this story to no end along with the second story.

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