Needs work ;/
From wattpad the story caught my attention just from the small cut that came from inside the story. The first chapter was amazing, the female character was closed off like I expected someone who has been bought and sold off constantly would be and from there it started going down hill. The male character didn't stick to his belief that he wasn't interested in his pet but slowly began to do the opposite. The grammar is HORRIBLE, I tried to ignore it all like everyone who has read the book but I just couldn't; there were so many misspelled words, words that didn't belong, and incorrect use of words. There were plot holes as well. All in all, this book turned out to be just like every slavexvampire master book is but just given more attention.
Read the story now
I'm saying that I want the book perfect, just that the author needs to use an editing app or proofread the chapter before its uploaded and go back to see what she missed.