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The Zombie Apocalypse


I personally feel like this is a very interesting story. However, I caught a lot of grammar mistakes in your writing. I am not one to talk when it comes to grammar because I know my story isn’t perfect, but maybe go over it a bit to brush up your story. Also leaving with out saying anything in that situation is the worst.

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What Happens Behind Closed Doors



Great story. I would suggest in your first chapter to describe the feeling of the character instead of telling. It would help hook the reader into what the character is feeling more. So the reader can empathize with the character and her pain. I personally feel sorry for the character though. Being abused by one father and not feeling like your home is safe has to be the worse feeling in the world. No one should also have to see their parents suffer like that. Although I do think you should describe more detail about why this situation happen. Maybe that’s later on the story? Overall, I’m highly interested.

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Her Dying Fate

I am speechless. Everything about your writing is perfect. From grammar, to writing style. Your descriptions are out of this world, I must say the way you wrote someone dying is a work of art. I can’t remember when I read a story this amazing!

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Butterfly Girls



First let me say it’s amazing you are focusing on mental illness in your characters. It’s refreshing because many authors usually write their characters off as perfect forgetting that characters are suppose to be similar to real life people. I know this is a horror novel and I have only gotten two chapters in, but the descriptions give the reader great imagery and not only that your writing style is perfect and sucks the reader in. Very good job on your story so far, can’t wait to see how it goes from here.

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The Witch Of Willow Lake

I must say. You are the first story on this app that I have truly liked the chapter and left a comment. Mainly because witches are one of my favorite things to read about. I do like how you introduced your character and I truly hope her parents will make it to her like they promised, but I have a feeling they won’t. I am excited to say I will definitely read onwards. :)

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Sweet Promises

Definitely interesting. The fact that he’s been dream sharing with her for so long. I wonder if he’s her mate. However, I do agree with him beating that guy up since he was most definitely trying to abuse and rape her. Nonetheless great story. Grammar and everything else was on point.

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The Heart of the Ocean



I want to say I only read the first chapter. I feel as if this chapter was putting everything into context for the future chapters, which means you have done a fantastic job. I like seeing the mother explaining to her daughter that she will always have hardships and she will overcome them, that’s a important lesson to learn at a very young age. As for her going off to find more shells for her castle, very kid like because most young children are not aware of the danger that poses. So great job on adding these details, and the scene with her drowning, well I have a feeling the person who will save her will be her future guy or girl. All in all great story.

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The Gem Of Blood

I must say that this story is very eye-catching and that it’s interesting to say the least. The grammar is good and the plot is interesting. In some parts you were too descriptive, but that’s better then not being descriptive at all. All in all great story!

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Five Words

I must say this story deserves a lot of praise. I was drawn into this story after only the first few paragraphs. The writing, the grammar, the description is all nothing, but perfect. You did a amazing job. As for your main character. I do understand why her boyfriend Adrian reacted that way, but the mother is right he most definitely can’t change his mind when he did have the chance to stay with her. Overall, this story is definitely one I would recommend to others.

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