Okay, I don’t want to come off as harsh or anything, but I do hope this can help you. The way you wrote your book description is not in the least eye catching. Personally, if I had read it with no knowledge prior to you I would not have read the story at all. I think you should change it up a bit to hook the reader in and get them to sink deeper into the world you created. Again, I’m not trying to be harsh or offend you. I just think I should be realistic as possible with this view. Another thing I took notice of is you introduced your character by telling instead of showing. Show us your character. Describe who she is and what she looks like by showing, don’t have her us. Please don’t be mad, I’m just giving my opinion on what I think you should improve. Other than that Normani seems pretty relatable and it’s nice to see a character more focused on her schooling then partying, having sex, or well men in general.
Read the story now