Zando

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interesting concept

I really like the concept behind this story. It almost feels like a black mirror episode, and it works well seeing it from two very different character perspectives, I'm very interested to see how the rest of the story goes and would want to see more of the world outside the facility. If I had to give any criticism I would say chapters 9 and 10 felt a bit rushed.

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Great start

Like the writing style and a great start to a story.

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