Zandy

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Nice

The grammar is on point. Even though there might be a few minor mistakes. The story is interesting but everything happens too fast. There is no proper background to support how everything connect to one other. You English is good but I feel like your writing style is a bit confusing at times . However overall your story is nice just change the pace a little and work on the background knowledge.

I was happy to read your book please update soon.

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Love+ Lust

You have a simple and nice story line. However as you are writing your novel in first perspective I suggest you express more of your character especially thier emotions what they are feeling at a particular moment. Your descriptive skills of the different scenarios that take place are not that bad it is just that your grammar can be a little bit lacking which can totally change the meaning you want to portray.
I advice that you try as much as you can to use the right grammatical texts. I also speak English as a second language so I understand how hard it must be for you to write and also express your ideas in a way that's confident enough for you to post. I applause and appreciate that. Keep in mind writing is a great way to practice any language you wish to learn.

I'm waiting to see what more you have to share with us.

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Interesting book and great imagination

This is a very interesting plot. You should keep it up keep interesting and engaging. However I have to comment about your grammar you should try to work on it. Bad grammar can totally change not only the meaning but also the mood and the interest of the reader towards the story. As a person who speaks English as a second language I'm not discouraging you but actually encouraging you. Keep in mind writing is a great way to practice your writing skills and vocabulary skills.

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