Z. Bleu

Erotic and intriguing...

Online platforms and lust—one of the most intriguing combinations; she can't touch, she can't smell, yet for Mikaela, Mr. Santana is as real as he could ever be. The first two chapters (published so far) set an exciting premise. Will her fantasies materialize? How far will they go?

The writing style fits the narrative; the lack of physical connection is expressed through virtual communication. I can't comment more, I feel like I need to know Mikaela better. That's why I can't wait for more chapters!

Good Job!

Will get you hooked!

Existential and philosophical, this novel will teleport you into the psyche of Pablo, a man with big hopes and dreams.

The writing style is what got me hooked; even though, some paragraphs were a bit chunky and in a need of some editing; the most descriptions and emotional scenes were beautifully crafted. What I liked even more was the balance between dialogues and inner monologue; it didn't feel forced and propelled the story forward.

Kudos to the author, and I hope to see you grow!