Dark and Mysterious
Used and abused, Amari, the cursed princess, has spent most of her life being controlled by the most toxic men. Even though at the first glance she might seem like a cliche broken damsel in distress, Amari exhibits her unique strength that, in my opinion, might unravel in the later chapters.
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The world story is set in is magical, to say the least; the descriptions immerse the reader into the mysterious and dream-like lands. The dialogue is realistic and conveys the emotions that are one of the most prominent aspects of this novel. GREAT JOB!
A few notes I'd like to add:
There were some inconsistencies when it comes to technicalities; sometimes the narrator jumps between past and present tenses which makes reading a bit confusing. Also, there are some unnecessary repetitions (e.g.: "The green dress slid down her thin BODY. Fear crept up her BODY.) and some sentences/paragraphs lack effective connecting, but nothing too distracting.
Overall, even though the story needs some polishing, it is definitely captivating and intriguing. I felt as if the first four chapters are only the beginning and I can't wait to find out what happens next!
THANKS for a lovely reading experience!!!