Verified_Dumbass

Amazing

I love this story so far and the plot is great so far but I gave it a three because there's only one chapter so I don't really know what the actual plot is yet. And I can't give story overall a five because again 1 chapter, don't know the story that much so far. I'll edit this when there are is/are new chapter/chapters. I love your stories and I can't wait to continue reading your wonderful stories. EDIT: I know I'm only on chapter three but OMG!!! This is mad good.

It is an amazing story

Honestly, It could use a bit more work. Like maybe to chapters can be longer, a little more detail too maybe? Overall I think it's an amazing story, I love that Gon and Killua's characters sorta tie in to their personalities from Hunter x Hunter. Maybe a little request to the story (Only do it if you wish to) I think the reader in the future should date Gon for a little to make Killua a little jealous. I think it would be quite funny and add some suspense to the story, again you don't have to do it. But anyways, Great story, totally suggest to readers who like HxH fanfictions. I cannot wait for the upcoming chapters ^^

I LOVE IT

Everything is spot on, to the punctuation, to the detail, and even to catching the characters personality's well. As a Hunter x Hunter anime watcher and a Hunter x Hunter fanfiction reader I can say that this is one if not the best fanfiction I have ever read on inkitt. I haven't been reading wattpad lately so I can't say it's one of the best compared to the wattpad fanfictions but I have 0 doubt that it's one of the best. Honestly I'm just suggesting maybe making the chapters a little longer if you can, I know the chapters are already pretty long but since I read a lot of really long chapter books I got used to it. It's totally fine if you can't/don't want to. Keep up the good work Bro! I can't wait to see the upcoming chapters!!