A Fun and Enjoyable Roller Coaster Ride
This story drew me in from the start. The pace was fast and once the story had me it didn’t want to let me go. I loved the concept, very original and executed very well. While some of the scientific aspects are a little iffy, this is Star Wars after all and they seem to follow their own set of scientific laws so it’s all good. It certainly didn’t detract from the overall story. The characterizations were very well fleshed out. You captured the spirit of the familiar characters and did a good job of having them interact with your original characters. The Emperor in particular was fun to follow.
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The only major problem I have is that the ending is pretty open ended and begs for a sequel so I hope you’re working on more because I can’t wait to see what happens next!