_JosephJacobson_

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Very Enjoyable!

I don't understand why this has such low ratings. I really enjoyed it!

I think that the whole idea behind the plot had something very special and that was something that I really enjoyed. It was new, unique.

I think that some of the writing was a little strange in places but overall it made sense and had a sense of purpose and direction.

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Boy Who Broke In My Window

Quick and Sweet.

I loved the plot of the story, lots of twists and turns and the characters were perfect... yet... this story was far from perfect.

The story was riddled with info dumps and I mean a LOT of info dumps. Every couple of lines and even right at the start of the novel which almost lost me.

Yet I still enjoyed it nevertheless.

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Catalyst Moon: Incursion

I love it.
Flowed really well and enjoyed the way the story flowed. I only read one chapter but I will defiantly come back for more!

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