Amazing! (SPOILERS AHEAD)
I'm so invested in this story! I'm not a fan of the two main characters simply because I don't like their personalities, but their problems and interactions are so interesting! I like the way they are with each other but deep down, I'm rooting for them not to be to together. I personally don't think they are a good match and that they should be with other people. There are some very likeable traits about James but I like him even less than I like Mila. While his core traits are admirable, I just don't like him. I want Mila to keep and not keep the baby at the same time. I think they would be great parents but I don't think they would be happy with it, and it's unfair for Mila to keep the baby as she doesn't want to be a mum. But my heart does really break for James as he so badly wanted to be a dad :(
For two characters that I don't like, I'm enjoying this story so much! The writing is great and the way you bring all of this to life is soo good! I look forward to reading more.
This review has been all over the place, haha!
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