_rosiecheeks_

Just a random person who loves to read, write and dance in her free time.

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very interesting!

It is very easy to read and I really like the whole concept of the story! It seems very unique and thought-out.
The only thing that makes the first chapter a little harder to read is the change of the pov. This might just be a personal preference, but I think that one pov per chapter makes everything clearer and much easier to understand.

Overall, this is a great start! Keep up with the good work!

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