A Bookworm

Diamond in the dust

This book really stood out to me, unlike some others I've read before. My first impression was "Woah, these characters are so relatable," and they were so much. I think Demi was the most relatable, for me. I can't lie, I'm a slow reader, but once I finished a few chapters I realized that I read SO MUCH. I guess that was just me getting slightly addicted. I love the romance (and Demi). This is such a great book!

Perfect Writing!

I was impressed by how perfect the twist was on Percy Jackson. The grammar and punctuation is perfect! Overall, this book made my day. Nick is definitely my favorite character in the book. I love his unique personality.

Great Book!

I really liked this book overall! In the first three chapters, I only caught one mistake, which is extraordinary! The writing style fits perfectly with the whole mood and it really feels like a movie to me.

The reason I gave the plot 4 stars is that the beginning kinda feels all over the place, with multiple plots. I'm not sure if they are intertwined or if it's just a backdrop for a bigger story though. So I can't say much- Though, I would try taking some sort of connection through the three. For example, chapter one was with vampires, so in chapter 2 there could have been a statue that looked like one, and then in chapter 3 the dream could have been about vampires. I think that will make it feel like one book!

Still, overall, the whole thing is writing beautifully and I hope to see where the story goes from here!

Nice Start!

I really love your idea and the title. The idea is really creative and I love the names (they're kinda addictive to say!). I do think you're grammar is a little off and needs some tweaking. The one part that slightly confused me was the very beginning because the story was set in the first perspective but then moves to the third perspective. Also, the way you write the name and a colon for the dialogue could be better if you used quotation marks. I hope you keep writing! The more you write the more you learn, just work on some small things!
Great Work,
A Bookworm

Creative Genius

This book was a perfect new version of Percy Jackson. It made me laugh every chapter and was the cherry on top to my day.

Extravagantly Amazing

Luminous makes a perfect story. Once I started reading I was dying to read more! The writing is perfect. I could see no mistakes, none at all. Each character the reader encounters has its own aura of personality. This book makes the perfect amount of comedy and adventure, along with a background in fantasy. The ideas here are so creative there're probably on a different scale! The way you make it so that readers slowly learn about this world makes me imagine the world in real life. Overall, I really enjoyed reading this book. I'm glad I found it!

Girl In Pain

This book almost made me cry. Just the beginning has a perfect amount of hook so you can't just stop. The writing style is similar to others, yet so different.

Perfect!

I loved this book! The way you create a connection that is so true and sweet between a person and their dog is just perfect. I also really love the idea, and it somewhat reminded me of the Hunger Games. I can't wait to finish it! Overall, I did spot a few grammar mistakes. I suggest one more read through!

Beautiful Blossoming

Reading this felt like I was in my own romance, my own adventure, catching up with my own "past life." I really liked the switching of perspectives and how you told the readers in the beginning. I think the POV's add a level of originality to the book, just because it's so rare. If I had to critique something, I would probably note the small grammar mistakes in each chapter. I struggle with grammar too, so I think I could suggest a small solution: reread your chapter out loud, either to yourself or someone else, and you might be able to catch some of them. It works for me sometimes, so I thought it might help. Anyway, I think this a perfect book, and I feel like I can see your personality through the book itself.

Beautifully Done

I started reading and I was instantly hooked! When I was reaching the end? I almost Pat myself on the back, just because I read so much. The way each chapter was plotted felt like it took years to plan! I love this book! Maybe even one of my favorites on Inkitt!

Perfect Grace

I love the details put into the main character! It seems like there is a world ahead of him, that he's missing out on! In the very beginning, the flashback confused me a little bit. It took me a few seconds to notice, but I think the break helped. I don't think that would be a big problem though. The writing style was so unique, I don't think I've seen anything like that! Great book, can't wait to read more!
Your reader,
A Bookworm

Deserves the Attention

Torn Paper was nothing like I expected! It got me hooked from the summary! I love how you describe little to nothing about the scene, but you make it enough for everyone to get it. The overall story was so unique, being set from little girl who understands very little. It really shows what she's going through. This deserves to be out there!

The Lost Heirs

The Lost Heirs provides a large amount of anticipation. One thing that popped to me was the writing. The style is so unique and the wording used provides bits of anticipation even in a single sentence.
Overall, I was extremely intrigued by the book and can't wait for more.

Shades of Winter

Shades of Winter is so compelling. The second you start reading the images just pop into your mind. The second you have to stop, you can't.