A Bookworm

Let the adventures begin!

Hi-lo, I'm Yehann! I write books to give people adventures that they could never have otherwise. I hope you enjoy them!

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Unbelievable

I can't believe this is actually including me. I feel so proud just being friends with y'all. I fI told my pre-sweetchildwriter self that THIS would happen, I would have probably slapped my future self. This will just be my go-to heaven.

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Perfect Beginning!

I loved how original this idea is! It's nothing like I've seen before, congrats! The writing style is pretty close to perfect, except, I do think when you add a piece of dialogue you should start on a new line. of course, you don't have to do that, but it's common in writings. I actually saw nothing wrong with your grammar, which is actually really hard! Keep writing! I can't wait to read more. My favorite Character: Juniper. (He reminds me of Grover from Percy Jackson) :3

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Perfect Writing!

I was impressed by how perfect the twist was on Percy Jackson. The grammar and punctuation is perfect! Overall, this book made my day. Nick is definitely my favorite character in the book. I love his unique personality.

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Creative Genius

This book was a perfect new version of Percy Jackson. It made me laugh every chapter and was the cherry on top to my day.

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Extravagantly Amazing

Luminous makes a perfect story. Once I started reading I was dying to read more! The writing is perfect. I could see no mistakes, none at all. Each character the reader encounters has its own aura of personality. This book makes the perfect amount of comedy and adventure, along with a background in fantasy. The ideas here are so creative there're probably on a different scale! The way you make it so that readers slowly learn about this world makes me imagine the world in real life. Overall, I really enjoyed reading this book. I'm glad I found it!

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Girl In Pain

This book almost made me cry. Just the beginning has a perfect amount of hook so you can't just stop. The writing style is similar to others, yet so different.

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Mind Blown...

I LOVED this book! I was hooked straight from the start! The characters are so relatable and each has their own personality. I love the idea and the introduction got me hooked. I think what really got me was the way the author described gravity. I feel like, even for children the way you describe it makes it seem so simple. This book was out of this world!

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SO SWEET~

We should actually promote dis guyzzzz.... Top-quality stuff here

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Beautiful Blossoming

Reading this felt like I was in my own romance, my own adventure, catching up with my own "past life." I really liked the switching of perspectives and how you told the readers in the beginning. I think the POV's add a level of originality to the book, just because it's so rare. If I had to critique something, I would probably note the small grammar mistakes in each chapter. I struggle with grammar too, so I think I could suggest a small solution: reread your chapter out loud, either to yourself or someone else, and you might be able to catch some of them. It works for me sometimes, so I thought it might help. Anyway, I think this a perfect book, and I feel like I can see your personality through the book itself.

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Beautifully Done

I started reading and I was instantly hooked! When I was reaching the end? I almost Pat myself on the back, just because I read so much. The way each chapter was plotted felt like it took years to plan! I love this book! Maybe even one of my favorites on Inkitt!

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Nice Start!

I really love your idea and the title. The idea is really creative and I love the names (they're kinda addictive to say!). I do think you're grammar is a little off and needs some tweaking. The one part that slightly confused me was the very beginning because the story was set in the first perspective but then moves to the third perspective. Also, the way you write the name and a colon for the dialogue could be better if you used quotation marks. I hope you keep writing! The more you write the more you learn, just work on some small things!
Great Work,
A Bookworm

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Perfect Grace

I love the details put into the main character! It seems like there is a world ahead of him, that he's missing out on! In the very beginning, the flashback confused me a little bit. It took me a few seconds to notice, but I think the break helped. I don't think that would be a big problem though. The writing style was so unique, I don't think I've seen anything like that! Great book, can't wait to read more!
Your reader,
A Bookworm

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Two of A Kind

In the beginning, it took me a little while to understand the story. Once I was through with the first chapter I was hooked. This writing style is different and unique compared to the ones I've read before. With the plot and setting of this story, I think the writing style is accurate and adds to the mood of the overall book. I think the basic idea of this book was extremely creative! It would take a long time to come up with a story like this! Love the book, great effort.

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The Lost Heirs

The Lost Heirs provides a large amount of anticipation. One thing that popped to me was the writing. The style is so unique and the wording used provides bits of anticipation even in a single sentence.
Overall, I was extremely intrigued by the book and can't wait for more.

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Shades of Winter

Shades of Winter is so compelling. The second you start reading the images just pop into your mind. The second you have to stop, you can't.

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Zoi

This booked opened a lot for me. The writing style is so unique I can't find anything like it. Not to be offensive, but I have to say... This sounded like a monks words to me.

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