Aa'ishah Isaacs

A good start

There is an interesting story around the girl and her connection to the spirit realm. Her understanding of it is particularly mystic and makes cor an interesting read. The plot is a bit convoluted at times. It may be the overlapping in storylines and POVs. It makes it a bit hard to follow when it changes so much but it's not completely distracting. There are the usual grammatical errors but I'm sure it will get buffed out with a round of editing. Overall, it's a good start and a promising story. ✌️

Vivid

The writer does a great job of painting a vivid picture. Not too much is given away which has piqued my interest. Keep the chapters coming. This was a good start👍

Britney cracks me up 😂

Fist off, the dual POV is 👌. Will has a very interesting take on things. Britney is fiery and I love that about her. So far the story is compelling and I'm enjoying it. Excited to see where it's headed.

You've got my attention

This story has caught my attention. The characters are well introduced and easy to like and latch onto. The story moves quickly without loosing depth or giving away too much. So far, this story has me quickly turning the pages. Well done!

Dark and Twisty....in a good way

I love how the author wants you to feel like you are in the mind of the protagonist. Beautiful descriptions which are both dark but also true. The plot keeps your attention and makes you excited for what will happen. well done!

Great start

The story holds a lot of promise. It is interesting and doesn't give too much away too soon. There are a few blunders here and there (but that's normal, all us writers make these mistakes, I know I do) but once those are buffed out, you will have a really great story. Keep working at it✌️

Visceral and haunting

What grabbed me immediately from the first chapter is the writing. Full of detail that brings not only the characters but the environment to life. This is a dark horror but it has an almost poetic flow that makes it an almost beautiful read. Truly well done.