One of the best books I have read on Mythology
Overall this story is very good and extremely well plotted, I must say. I wish to see more of you: I hope you continue with this to say the least. To be a good critic, I must be honest, I see you have potential yet you seem to lose the readers interest with the lack of character developments at a reasonable pace. Furthermore, You must at least explain the time gap between one scene and the next as if it does not it may confuse the reader. On the other hand, You have excellent grammar and spelling and also explain a God/Goddess(which is good as some readers don't have a clue on mythology) which expands the readers' knowledge. I really want you to consider my words to continue as it would be a disappointment if this is not completed to the best standard, if not then at least write another book as a bright mind like yours should not be wasted on any one's opinions, thoughts...Know that I appreciate your work.👍👍👍
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