Areesha Bibi

One of the best stories

Oh my fucking God!!!The happiest parts made me smile so much that my mouth felt sore. Overall,out of all the stories I have read in my lifetime,your one is very intriguing as their were interesting plot twists and parts where it made my heart beat fast due to the characters position.This is a truly sensational story.I would advise you to over-read this and take out any minor mistakes spotted.Well done for effort and I hope to see more of your time-consuming books -don't get me wrong they are worth it-in the future.

Deserves to be published

This is a book that deserves to be praised to full extent. This is a book full of original work and has an amazing structure of feeding the reader emotions. This is a story that reaches out to many and without a doubt bring tears to anyone (that is a human). I praise the author and will try my best to get this story published! This novel must have had a lot of hard work and dedication poured towards itself and would rank this story with the likes of Steven Kings, of course without certain horrors.

Interesting

I enjoyed the short story...Even if it is short. I loved the way it was complex yet so simple. I am suggesting that you can write a proper story based on this short story, yet giving it a further flourish of beginning, middle and end. If given enough detail and chapters, you might get a lot of views and likes. Well done on engaging the reader and a good plot. So I will suggest again you writing a novel based on this short story.

Your prodigious novel

Your novel is intricately detailed and is an impressive performance of what you can achieve. I would love for this book to be continued and would love Syler's point of view as well if you are thinking of writing a second book. This is me being hopeful of seeing more excellent pieces of writing from you.I would like to help you if needed and wouldn't mind checking your grammar for you if you want? That's your choice, but overall you can achieve anything you put your mind to. 👍🏻

From your fan Areesha😜

This story

This story is exquisite due to it not being a stereotype or cliché. The story built up platforms and emotion which proved to be useful as the story developed. Also, the idea of Greek mythology was excellent and really added a spar and individuality to this story which separates itself from others. I would find it a better read if there was a wider range of vocabulary but that might just be me. Overall, This story was an interesting read and there is no doubt that I would read it again.

One of the best books I have read on Mythology

Overall this story is very good and extremely well plotted, I must say. I wish to see more of you: I hope you continue with this to say the least. To be a good critic, I must be honest, I see you have potential yet you seem to lose the readers interest with the lack of character developments at a reasonable pace. Furthermore, You must at least explain the time gap between one scene and the next as if it does not it may confuse the reader. On the other hand, You have excellent grammar and spelling and also explain a God/Goddess(which is good as some readers don't have a clue on mythology) which expands the readers' knowledge. I really want you to consider my words to continue as it would be a disappointment if this is not completed to the best standard, if not then at least write another book as a bright mind like yours should not be wasted on any one's opinions, thoughts...Know that I appreciate your work.👍👍👍