Anna. B 🌻

I’m just a 17 year old who started writing because of quarantine boredom. Wattpad-abnwrites

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Interesting!

Personally, I was hesitant when I read the summary, mainly because I was worried that it was going to be like all the other cliche stories out there. Instead, this author did an amazing job making the plot hers. I love the characters and the way you include different events in the story to keep the reader's attention. There are grammar mistakes that are easy to fix. Lovely story!

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Amazing!

I love this story so much! From the way the plot unfolds to the characters there isn’t anything I can complain about!

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Can’t put down

I don’t even know where to start when it comes to this story. I absolutely adore all the characters and the plot. The way everything was written and thought out makes the book addictive and once you start, I promise it’s hard to put down. I spent late nights reading this telling myself one more chapter until I reached the end. I love it so much!

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Interesting

I didn't expect the story to start off the way it did and it did escalate quicker than I would have preferred. My only big thing that I think should be worked on, is the attention to the important events. I feel like more time could be spent on these parts as it did feel rushed to me when I read it. Besides that and a couple of grammar mistakes here and there, I think you have an amazing story that really does get the reader hooked right from the start.

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Amazing

Personally, I found the story faced paced. I loved the story line and the idea you have going, but I do think you need to spend more time in the beginning introducing your characters so we know what they are like alone. I do think you have great characters and I found them interesting. Besides a couple of grammar mistakes there isn’t anything else I have to say.

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Great Start!

I think there is still a lot of work when it comes to grammar. I love the idea of the story, but the grammar really does interfere with the reader's understanding. If you fixed those mistakes, I'm sure everything you are trying to portray will come out a lot better.

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Enjoyed It!

All in all, I think you have a solid plot that captures the readers attention. Personally it wasn’t something that I would have read just based on the summary. I definitely noticed some grammar mistakes that could be easily fixed and the over usage of ellipsis did bother me in the beginning. Besides that there isn’t really anything else to say. I really enjoyed it

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Wow

I'm going to start this off by apologizing because I know you stopped to comment on my story frequently, but I'm not much of a commenter.

I really love the plot that you have going. You really captured my attention. I think all in all the formatting is what threw me off the most. I struggle with the same thing but when the sentences or words didn't have space between them it really ruined the flow. I also think that inserting some transitions would help so everything doesn't seem as sudden and one event immediately right after another without hearing from the character a little bit more. I hope all of this makes sense and I'm sorry if it comes off rude.

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Absolutely Amazing!

Oh wow, where do I start?

This is beautifully written. Just by reading your summary you had me hooked. The way you described everything makes me feel like I know exactly what they are going through. I don’t think I could complain about anything really. I actually wished it was longer because your style is so beautiful and the plot is amazing.

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Straight to the Point!

I’m willing to change my review when the story is completed but as of now this is what I have:

I love the plot that you have going for your story. It’s really interesting and captures the reader’s attention.

I will say that because of your writing style, I wasn’t able to get as hooked onto the story as I would have liked to. Everything was put literally and it didn’t leave room for me to experience what was going on. I’m not sure if that makes sense and I’ll be happy to share more specifically if you want.

I also noticed a mix of past and present tense and it threw me off.

Of course I have to end this in a happy note and I will say I love the questions you ask in the end as a way to tease the readers about what happens next. It keeps them anticipating.

Can’t wait to read what happens next.

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Couldn’t put it down!

I loved the story. I will definitely be re-reading this story once again. The grammar was amazing and everything was clear when I read it. The only thing I wished was different was for the author would go more in depth about what Jamie was dealing with.

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One of My Favorite Books!

I absolutely adore this story. I initially found this story on Wattpad and when I saw it on Inkitt I just had to re-read the story. The author does a good job with the plot and adding in humor. The characters personalities are well built. The book will have you losing track of time. I know I will defiantly be coming back to read this story again.

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Amazing!

Despite the book not being complete year. The moment I found this story I knew I would be willing to wait as long as possible to see where it goes. It had me hooked from the summary and I’m always waiting for more. Every week I can’t wait till it’s Wednesday just to see a new chapter. Everything is well written and the author does a good job at portraying the characters.

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I Love it!

I absolutely love this series. This book has you hooked from the start and is well written. Every time a chapter is published, I’m always waiting for more.

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