A delight of a story
I was shocked reading this,
it was so colorful and the character seemed so determined .
The characters had such strong personalities, it was like a mask
secrets unfolding at every turn . Just like a amazing story should be.
This is a unique true talent you have .
I felt if the story was expanded a bit in terms of furls surroundings (ex: friends what she like to do, her gift and how she learn to control her powers ) but im all postives and that is not even something to worry about
i really am a huge fan of your writing style , your narrative compositon is exquiste., you bring a voice into my mind when i read your story.
Nevertheless, i see a good story. She seems to be a very enjoyable character lively and witty .
i cant wait to read the rest.
This story is superb . I Love the building suspense that held me to every page.
your grammar was stunning and your vison in black and white created an eerie memory of the past.
You voice has a unique narration to the view of the story. The plot unravels gracefully and the horror and mystery of it keeps the flow of the story going well.
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