Achilles Boom

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Great book

Love it love it love it

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One of my best reads so far!sad that it’s over would love to read the rest

Very good work as far as I can tell I’m interested and the book is engaging I have been reading it for 3 days straight , it’s well thought out, the plot is great, writing skill is one of the best I have seen on Inkitt and I love that it has God and also a magical world in it. It’s new and exciting a good way to reach youth I would think.

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Really amazing work

Where is the rest of the book I’m so disappointed right now

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Potential

I would love to see some great new authors published and their new and exciting worlds become someone’s place of peace in there homes I think this writer has great potential and could go far, she needs someone to work with her to proof read her work and help her dream of writing become a reality. This particular book has great potential but is lacking in some areas that are key to publishing, however I see great potential as the writer has a good imagination and has a good vocabulary in her writing.

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Amazing work

I have been trying my hardest to get a copy in hard back of it and I would also like a copy in hard back of the first book

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It’s good but could be so much more

The plot is good however I have ever liked cussing in any book really and as much as I like the plot the chapters are to short it could be made into a world class book if the writer went back over it and added more detail to the timelines but I would say it’s a great start to what could one day be a top seller

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There are some grammar issues that need to be fixed but it isn’t serious at all the book is fabulous the plot and writing style are immaculate one of the best I have seen, this would make a fabulous movie that if it where ever directed would be added to my collection as well if you ever print it in hard back I would purchase it to add it to my book collection too.

I would recommend this book to a screen director it would be an amazing movie and anyone who likes things like game of thrones or lord of the rings this fits in perfectly with those

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