Adalyn River

I’m a young teen trying to make a living off of writing (hopefully). Been writing since age 7 and I would surely say I’ve improved, but feel free to check it out yourself!

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Intriguing, but needs work.

I absolutely love this book and will defiantly continue reading! But what really irritated me to the depths of my soul was all the missing periods each time someone was done talking. I’m not sure if that’s a certain writing style or something, but I do think it needs to be fixed when editing comes along. But the writer has such an excellent way of writing; a writing style that I’d prefer to have. It’s so rhythmic and elegant, but not overdone. It makes the story much more interesting and it defiantly helped pull me in.

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