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The Empire Project

Really enjoyed the story, and would have problem at all in recommending it. The story flows really well, the grammar and punctuation is good, and the characters, well rounded and believable. The inner dialogue works well. The only small thing that I noticed about the inner dialogue is that it was a little stilted to begin with, but later on flows more naturally. It's only a very small thing in a story that was a very enjoyable read.

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