I could see this as an episode of Con Man. Funny and a quick read! I enjoyed it. The characters are dead on and the plot would fit in anywhere in the Con Man episode timeline. I especially like the fact that it's well rounded. Good beginning, middle, and end. Thank you for sharing your work with us.Read the story now
Continue the Saga!
All I have to say is, continue the saga. Please don't leave me hanging. I need to know more. I love the world you created. Very nice. I really like the characters. It hurt me when Daniel died. He's awesome. Good bad guys and great heroes. You have some great set pieces.
I would use the scene with Gabriel and Ryla facing off against The Devourer in the Crypt as the picture on your book cover. Just as he transforms and turns to them and roars. Great moment, great image. The final battle with Daniel is very cool though also. Just some ideas.
It's all well written. Very detailed in creating a fun and unique world with characters of flesh and bone that we care about. I could see this as a movie or as a video game actually. Deep back story with a world of stories to explore. Very cool. Keep it up. This is a series that I would buy. Good job.