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ADDIE DOT
Bangalore, India
Writing stories is a way of leaving reality and diving into my imagination. I am new and I want to experience writing.
Interesting
It's interesting. There are some typos that are not rectified. Hope you correct it and update the story.
Read the story nowInteresting characters
The characters in this story are so interesting. They all have something to say, a deep background and influential attitude. That makes it so fun to read.
The plots are stricter well, dialogues are quite nice. There are some minor grammatical errors.
A beautiful short and sweet fantasy
The author has a very good grip over thw writting skills, especially in terms of structuring of it. There is suffucient detailing where required and the inner thoughts coupled with the feelings of the characters. There is an element of thrill and suspense which keeps the reader turning the pages and reading the next paragraphs. Though there were instances where there was a little detail required, but overall, just an amazing, beautiful and pleasant story. Good work.
Read the story nowAmazing Story
The idea of this story itself is very compelling. Also the start to it very involving. The author has a really good compsition of past and present in the chapter with a good pace to it. However, the discription needs to be increased, such as the feelings of the characters. Overall it is a good story that I would recommend.
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