Adelina Taneva

I’m so excited for you all to read and meet the people from my head! Make sure you vote and leave an honest review ❤️❤️

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Needs a lot of work

I only got to chapter 14 but I’m having seriously problems with his behaviour. He is way beyond possessive and borderline abusive in his controlling ways and how he doesn’t listen to her when she says no- that’s assault.

Then there is the horrible grammar which makes me the story so hard to write that you have to force yourself to carry on.

I feel like this needs some serious work as the plot is not too bad but it needs to be written again and edited very heavily.

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Need more!!

I have read every single book in the series and this one does not disappoint! I have fallen in love again with the characters and I cannot wait until the whole series is published so I can buy all of them! I cannot wait to read more as Jay never disappoints with her stories and swoon worthy characters!

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Amazing!!

I don't normally read books multiple times but I have found myself reading this book over and over again! Same goes with all of her other books as I have been a fan for years now-- this book is definitely a must read!!

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