Adel Sudom

Hey would really appreciate some feedback on my psychological thriller 'Look Into My Eyes'
See link below :)
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/mystery/802025
I entered it in the 'Turn off The Lights' Thriller Contest.
In the event you're not a fan of dark/violent material, have a look at my epic fantasy novel 'Silent Storm'
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/834998
So Read, Like, Share!
Feel free to let me know if you have any books you would like me to read as well

Good day Adel, if you’re interested in dark romances with psychological themes, then I would love for you to give my first ongoing novel Calibers in your Flesh a try.

It includes several mature themes that are not suitable for anyone under the age of 18, or for the faint of heart and will certainly twist yours. You may or may not experience the true meaning of depravity in the pages.

Any and all constructive criticism, feedback, comments and reviews are extremely appreciated if you decide to give it a go. Thank you for your time and more importantly, stay safe!🖤