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Powerful!

Interestingly enough, this story touches on different psychological states and was very informing, on top of being a solid story. Although somewhat predictable, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this; I could feel the fear and the frustration of the characters, and was happy when they were happy.
Even better, there are very minimal mistakes in the writing (in terms of grammar and such) - an unnoticeable amount.
Lastly, I want to mention that the situation the main character finds himself in is very real, and feels just as real in this story. I could literally feel the push from the author that makes me want to help out in real life. This is a powerful story.
Definitely recommended as a must-read. Although some might be unable to relate to the main character, they will come to understand why certain decisions are made, and why some aren't.

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