A.E. Roberts

“All the world’s a stage, And all the men and women merely players.” William Shakespeare /NO SELF-PROMO on my WALL!

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Haunted Chapel review

Haunted Chapel is an intricate story that depicts the fight between good and evil. I like the descriptions and how the writer built the story and developed its main character, Mason. The novel is full of surprises, good or bad, tears and joy, and lots of life lessons. Good job, Brian! I wish you good luck with your writing career.

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Birth of a free bird review

An excellent flowing story with unique characters that complete each other. I love the emotion behind it, the emotion of discovering the world as it is - real and full of unknown. The writer underlines the power inside us - the power to adapt to the real world. You will feel, live and suffer with the characters, brilliantly depicted by the writer. Good job 😊

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Seven - Is the end of the world coming?

The first chapter introduced me a painful truth, a truth contemporary with our times. It was well pointed out that humans are a cause of destruction, which I agree. The fact that was a dream took me by surprise. I love the novel, is well written, the two main characters are original and fresh, and the story flows in the right direction. I love the writer's style and can wait to read more of her work 😍

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The Willow Rise Six review

I can say that reading this novel I realised that I really missed western novels. A big fan of Winnetou’s adventures, I filled my adolescence with Karl May’s books. The Willow Rise Six is a delightful surprise with a caching first chapter.
The story is straightforward, flawless, and the characters are very real, complex; in a word well-crafted. Their arc is clear and well built. I like Sam and his perception of the world. The author extraordinarily described Alice as a woman with a lot of interests and also revengeful. I like the way Bill came out - very complex character.
I love the writer’s style - relaxed and precise. Also, the plot keeps you reading, and the story has a nice pace (a bit slow sometimes) and good transitions. There are excellent descriptions helping in creating an extraordinary world. We have action, suspense and consistency, which is enough to keep you reading until the end. I would have liked more dialogue. Besides physical appearance and actions, the dialogue can help build a veridical character.
Another plus point goes for the cover. I love it!

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Spirit of Fire review

I love the imaginary world depicted in the story and the fact that there are elementals and magic included, even if I perceived this story as a romance story more than a fantasy one because of the abundance of Coburn & Saffire scenes (including their thoughts) which is unique, intimate and lovely. I enjoyed the interactions between the characters - realistic and sustained by the flowing dialogues. The main characters are original and you can see them grow into forceful leaders for their kind. Excellent usage of words which made me submerge into the story and feel the love, tension and drama.
The first chapters were slow-paced and the story included a lot of description, especially of clothes (again just at the beginning of the story.) Also there are small gaps like explaining the past which could be helpful to understand the entire story.
Overall, Spirit of Fire is a well-written book, with strong build characters and extremely touching. Excellent work!

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Blinding Light Review

After reading few chapters I can say that the story intrigued me. The present and the past well blended, the complexity of the story, the intricate plot, and the characters' development made me give it five stars. Good job. 😊

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Released

Released is well-written, emphasising the complex mind of a writer unable to find inspiration wherever he looks. The writer depicts the struggle through reactions, inner thoughts and dialogue. Everything is perfectly intertwined. Good job!

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REJECTED!!!

This collection of letters is exceptionally fun. You can see how much fun the writers have in criticising their work (me including.) It's like admitting that you cannot please everybody and of course that you have so much to learn. Writing is not that easy as everyone thinks! Thank you, Martha, for giving us the opportunity of being part of this magnificent project.

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Accepting Him review

The story is nicely built, characters are well developed, and there is a deepness in their feelings which makes the story flawless. Good job and good luck with your writing!

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Alpha's Boy review

Great start, you did a good job setting the story and the characters. Love the dialogues, and I think they underline the character’s way of being. It is a pleasant story, and I am sure that it will get better as will unfold. A bit of work with grammar and punctuation, and that is it. Good job!

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Extraordinary😍

The story is so well written and characters, even if they are quite a few, are extraordinarily handled by the writer—excellent descriptions, not dull and unique characters with such personality. I keep thinking that it will make an exceptional movie or series, why not. Congrats to the writer and I will be waiting for more.❤

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Deadly Sins of Eellendra review

"Deadly Sins of Eellendra" is an extraordinary book which takes you into a magic world. The writer has a vast vocabulary and the necessary experience to depict an entire 'alien' wold - the unicity of it hooked me. I had so much to learn from the author's technical skill. The story is well written, and it has all the elements for a best seller. I am glad that I had the chance to read it. Excellent job! 😍

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'Inside out' review

The story is original, complex and easy to follow. There is a lot of action, and characters that
interact and contribute to the story's flow.
Overall is a captivating story which makes you want to read the next chapter. I warmly recommend editing for the small grammar issues.

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Excellent story!

I love fantasy and this book has everything to be an excellent relaxing reading. If you like fantastic creatures there are plenty; there is action that will keep you hooked and nicely build characters. The author did an excellent job. Bravo 👏👏

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Hidden

This book is well written and the story flows nicely making you craving for more. There is mystery, good and evil, and characters that grow and develop like in real life. It is definitely one of the best books that I read, here on Inkitt❤

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Excellent written!

The book is well written, and it has everything to keep you hooked. The characters are complex and make you want to know them better. The story flows nicely making you craving for more. I love it!

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Review of Awen: Tongue of Flame

I love the writer's "voice'. The descriptions and the dialogues are depicting the future and its problems. The story has explosive moments, paragraphs which keep you in suspense and solid build characters. From my point of view in order to write about the future, you need an extraordinary imagination because everybody can write about past or present as we have all the data that we need: in history books or from experience.
I am pleased that I had the chance to read your novel and I will definitely read the second one.

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I love it!

I love the action of this book, and cannot wait to see where it goes. Good job!

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I love it!

I love the way in which the characters are build and love the dialogue. Good job!

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